It's good, and very well made but... It needs a storyline and a plot to it. Something that grabs the viewers attention and holds it in a headlock until they're begging you to make a new one.
Well, you begged me to comment, so here it goes: Firstly, I'd increase the FPS for a faster playback (click "Edit" under your movie). Secondly, although well executed, the subject of a drawing transitioning to a final render is not exactly a compelling cup of mojo. But, in the end, it's all about how YOU feel about your own masterpiece. Thirdly, for your next FlipBook, why not give the audience a short "anime" episode... storyboard a sequence on a notepad, then turn to FlipBook and start with a beginning frame, then the final frame, add a few more frames in-between the first and final with content crucial, add more frames in-between these frames... keep it up until you get a compelling sequence. Remember, you also have layers to play around with, so plan your movie out sensibly and use every tool at your disposal. And fourthly, no, I don't hate you... whatever gave you that impression?
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Check out my omnom ball animation, I luv how u do these intricate drawings :)
That was pretty sweet! I'd say about 15 fps. But that's just me. It's up to you, and I'll still like either way. :)
How bout now?
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Try making it faster. I know you want people to see the steps, but the people want you to give em some action. A little speed should do the trick! :D
It's good, and very well made but... It needs a storyline and a plot to it. Something that grabs the viewers attention and holds it in a headlock until they're begging you to make a new one.
Well, I made it slow so you can see the steps better
Well, you begged me to comment, so here it goes:
Firstly, I'd increase the FPS for a faster playback (click "Edit" under your movie).
Secondly, although well executed, the subject of a drawing transitioning to a final render is not exactly a compelling cup of mojo. But, in the end, it's all about how YOU feel about your own masterpiece.
Thirdly, for your next FlipBook, why not give the audience a short "anime" episode... storyboard a sequence on a notepad, then turn to FlipBook and start with a beginning frame, then the final frame, add a few more frames in-between the first and final with content crucial, add more frames in-between these frames... keep it up until you get a compelling sequence.
Remember, you also have layers to play around with, so plan your movie out sensibly and use every tool at your disposal.
And fourthly, no, I don't hate you... whatever gave you that impression?
How is it?